Friday, August 17, 2012

ArHi OS: A Bit Of Masti

Hello all lovely readers... I'm back with another OS... I know I was supposed to update for one of my FFs but I felt a little push from the inside to write this OS. For all this time since I said I was going to discontinue The Silent Farewell... many of you convinced me to continue this FF, but this one friend of mine from IF, tried so hard to convince me, she PMed me, Scrap Messaged me, Commented on my FF, and even commented here with all her love to make me continue my FF. With her convincing and beautiful messages I decided to continue my FF. Then I got criticized again after Chapter 3, but then I remembered her words that I shouldn't care what people say and I should just continue this FF.

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A huge shout out to Mannat27 and this OS is dedicated to her...
( I hope you enjoy this OS my friend)

OS: A Bit Of Masti


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“Arnav… are you coming or not?” Khushi looked up at him carrying their 5 year old Varun.
“Khushi… I have a lot of office work pending though…” Arnav looked up at her helplessly only to see that she was already sitting in the car.
“I don’t care! I’m going and you could sit there with your laptop and type as much as you want!” Khushi buckled up Varun.
“Ok at least leave Varun here…” Arnav rolled his eyes.
“So that my son could get influenced by you?” Khushi asked.
“What did I do now?”
“Today Varun was asking for a laptop for himself!” Khushi boiled in anger.
“So you should have told me… I bought a new one too today, so I could have bought one for him too…” Arnav sighed.
“Arnav… he’s only 5 years old and he’s already becoming like you!” Khushi folded her arms.
“Isn’t that a good thing though?” Arnav smiled.
“Really… your 5 year old son wanting a laptop at age 5, running around in the house yelling ‘What the’ when I ask him to drink his milk and more overly taking your Bluetooth and talking to Aman all day long pretending to fix a deal! Wow Arnav… that is such a good thing…” Khushi said sarcastically.
“My son’s following my footsteps aren’t  you Varun?” Arnav turned over and bent down to find his son with a broad smile on his face sitting in the car.
“When I don’t listen to your  son, he says in your words ‘UNBELIEVABLE’, and then when I order him to eat his food he replies ‘no one orders Varun Singh Raizada’, and when Aman came over the other day and called Varun, he said to call him VSR just like you get called ASR… Arnav… you are spoiling our Varun a lot!” Khushi sat on the footsteps.
“Calm down Khushi… it’s ok…” Arnav caressed her shoulder.
“No! It’s not ok! Sometimes I think that Varun is a double copy of you… he doesn’t sit in poojas properly, he doesn’t like sweets even jalebis! He has no similarities with me… jaisa baap vaisa beta” Khushi pouted.
“Don’t worry… I’m sure our daughter will be exactly like you…” Arnav smiled.
“Nope… I don’t have any hopes for her either. Usually when I’m angry or upset I always make jalebis… now I do gardening like you do when you’re frustrated. And I even drink Black Coffee with no sugar… just like you do… Hai Devi Maaiyaan!” Khushi walked back and forth biting her nails.
“Oh come on Khushi… stop acting so childishly… look even Varun’s laughing…” Arnav picked up Varun.
“I’m a 100% sure that our daughter will be as crazy as you…” Arnav made Varun sit on his shoulders.
Arnav bent down on both knees and kissed Khushi’s 9 month pregnant belly while Khushi kissed Varun from a top.
Their family was complete and now they were going to have a new member in their family. Well Khushi had already met ASR’s Reflection… meaning his junior… now it was time to meet KKGSR’s Reflection… meaning her junior.
Their daughter was coming this time and there were chances that she too had Arnav’s habits. That was the only thing that kept her in worry.
“Arnav!” Khushi yelled.
He looked up to see her shocked expression.
“I think my water just broke!” Khushi looked down.
“What the!” said their little Varun.
“See… he’s got your habits!” Khushi argued.
“Both of you just shut up!” Arnav buckled up Varun again and made Khushi sit in the car.
He drove to the hospital as fast as he could; in fact he had passed at least 10 red lights.
“Khushi… calm down…we’re here…” Arnav tried to calm his wife who was breathing hard.
“Shut up Arnav! You’re telling me to calm down!” Khushi held his collar.
‘Don’t worry… Khushi was like this during Varun as well… she’s just panicking… nothing else…” Arnav eased himself.
The Doctor came and took her in the room. A while later he came out asking Arnav to come in to see their newborn daughter.
“Kiara… my princess… “ Arnav smiled as he kissed her forehead.
“#1 checked off… it’s a girl and for sure she’s just like you…” Arnav kissed Khushi’s forehead.
“Where’s Varun?” Khushi looked around.
“Oh… him… he got scared of your screams and he asked me that next time if he ever asks for a sister or brother, I should remind him of his mother’s screams and he’ll take his promise back. I sent him off with Akash and Payal… I think he shouldn’t be terrified of his mother’s screams…” Arnav laughed.
“It’s not funny Arnav… I was the one  here giving birth to our baby girl… do you know how much it hurt and you’re so scared to even come inside to see your daughter coming out of there!” Khushi mocked him.
“I am not!” Arnav argued.
“Yes you are Arnav… even for Varun… you ran out of the room before he even came out so don’t talk rubbish!” Khushi laughed.
“Shut up!” Arnav pouted childishly.
5 years later…
“Mumma make some jalebis for me please…” said a now 5 year old Kiara.
“See I told you our daughter will just be like you…” Arnav hugged Khushi from behind while she was making jalebis.
“Eww!” said a now 10 year old Varun.
“And he’s still just like you…” Khushi rolled her eyes.
“Well one child like me and one like you…” Arnav nuzzled her neck.
“Another one’s coming and hopefully this one will be a mix of you and me…” Khushi winked at him and gave a plate of jalebis to Kiara and gave Varun a paratha which he ate with a fork just like his father.
Khushi left Arnav there in the kitchen shocked. She could tell by his face expression that he wasn’t expecting this…
“Varun… you’ll have to hear your mumma’s screams in the hospital again beta…” Khushi warned him earlier.
“What the! Am I getting another brother or sister now?” Varun asked his mother.
“Dad! I told you that I don’t want to hear mumma’s screams again and now Kiara will have to hear them too…” Varun sighed.
But Arnav was still standing in the kitchen and didn’t react a bit even when Khushi handed him his mug of black coffee.
“Enjoy…” she winked at him and left.

I hope you enjoyed this OS my friend  Mannat27 drop your comment below and let me know what you think...

Thank you all for encouraging me to write and I have made a change that I will only update my OSs on IF and here so that I could get more viewers and more Buddies... but I still want you all to comment here though :)

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The Unexpected... Became The Expected Chapter 16 :)



25 comments:

  1. A Very very sweet os...simply loved it.

    Farheen75

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  2. nice os.. .loved arshi's 2 kids.. :)

    -goldengirl.0123(IF)

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  3. awww so cute
    [ASR6262]

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  4. Aww this was adorable!!!!
    Nazibah (I-F)

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  5. To say that I am surprised would be an understatement!

    The OS Having Bit Of Masti....it's so cuteeeeeee!!!!!!
    Arnav, Khushi, Varun, and Kiara....everyone was so cute and just perfect for each other. Aaawwwww Ravneet, the OS is so sweet!

    Thank you so much! It means a lot to me! Thanks!

    But anyhow, you don't have to thank me for anything! You are the one who braved yourself and continued with all your determination, confidence, and talent. So the entire credit goes to you!

    So everyone, lets wish Ravneet for her victory!!!! CONGRATULATIONSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    :)

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  6. awww so cute updt
    love it
    thanks for pm
    summaiyasayed

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  7. Thanks for the PM. Very nice and cute.

    +desisweetheart9 from IF.

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  8. That was a really cute OS :) really enjoyed reading it!!

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  9. Man that was fab..!! Hilarious! What would their third child be named...?? This was too good...
    Thanks for the pm...

    -smdosi from IF

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  10. So sweet OS...
    Loved the happy family...
    Thanks for the PM...
    -sithu08

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  11. wow! amazing os loved it........
    so sweet a cute family...
    one boy n one girl...n another is coming.......
    so well written......

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  12. LOL :D
    it was great.!
    really loved it..:)

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  13. a very very sweet update ....

    luvd it :)

    ARKUSHLOVE

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  14. Like I said on IF this was funny and cute. Thanks for the pm

    IF: Rashika

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  15. awww....even their children r sooo cute!

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  17. That was so cute....and I think u can write such cute FFs too....more pleased to read such stories!!!!! :) Loved the name Kiara,it was splendid...nice choice!!!!

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  18. Oh this was beautiful
    a junior asr n kkgsr sweet
    loved it
    BarunForever

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  19. that was so adorable..
    simply awsum..
    loved the junior version of ASR n KKGSR....

    anumeha_rajat [IF]

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  20. Aww this is super cute!! :) xxx I love this!! :) xxx
    Anniecheli1997

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  21. Lovely OS. Super Cute.

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  22. Total Crazy but lovely family...

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