Sunday, November 18, 2012

ArHi FF: Book 1 ~ The Unexpected... Became The Expected Chapter 20B

Only the Final Chapter is left :(
And then the journey of Book 1 will be over,
but I'll come back with Book 2

I've decided to reply to each of your comments,
so when you comment, the next day just check and you'll see a response :)

Chapter 20B

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“What the!” Arnav’s face had the sudden shock.
“Haan Chhotte… yeh sabse accha plan hai…” Naani was delighted.
“Do you even realize what you’re saying Naani?” Arnav stood completely shocked.
“Naani is right Bhai…” Akash interrupted.
“You too Akash? Has this family gone crazy?”
“Arnavji… Khushi would love it…” Payal squealed.
“I’ve brought the paint home Nannav…” NK walked in with 6 cans of paint, along with Hari Prakash and Jai Prakash.
‘Seriously? A business man was going to paint a room?’ Arnav closed his eyes.
“Om Prakshji kamar ko set kar rahe hai…” NK continued.
At that moment everyone had burst into laughter. “NK bhai kamra… kamar nahi…” Akash corrected him.
“Haan vahi vahi…”
“I’m not doing this Naani…” Arnav stood up to leave, only to be pulled back.
Naani pulled Arnav’s ear as he begged for mercy, “Ouch Naani… please let go of my ear…”
“Apne nahi liye toh kamse kam Khushi bitiya aur apn hone waale bache ke liye toh karlo!” she pulled his ear even more.
“Naani the baby still has time… abhi toh 8 months pade hai…”
“Toh! Phele se aane waale mehemaan kii tayaariaan kiijiye!” she dragged him to the room, along with the Prakash brothers holding the paint buckets.
Anjali was watching everything. For her, no one cared about her daughter’s room. Aysha only got a plain pink room with white furniture. It was filled with teddy bears, but Anjali couldn’t digest the fact that Khushi’s unborn child was already being pampered.
“Chhotte’s right Naani… abhi uuske baby ko aane mein kitna waqt pada hai… Chhotte why don’t you paint Aysha’s room?” she smiled.
“Arre Anjali bitiya… Daamaadji hai na… who kardeinge… Chhotte toh apn Chhotte ke kamre ko sajayeinge..."
Anjali faked a smile and let the topic go. She couldn’t argue, and neither could she protest, hence she simply went back to her room.
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“NK!” Arnav yelled his name.
Hearing no response, Arnav called him again, “NK get your ass down here!”
“Whats happends Arnav bitwa?” Maami came in all worried.
“NK bought 4 different paint colours!”
“Toh ka huwa bitwa…”
“Maami a room is painted 1 colour… not 4 different colours…” he looked at her all confused.
“Nannav… this is a baby’s room not a black and white picture’s room. If your room is dull, it doesn’t mean that my Niece or Nephew will also have a dull room…” NK bit into his apple.
He chewed as Arnav looked at him with a funny look, “You’re saying that you’re going to make this room look like a rainbow? With colours like red, white, blue and gold?” he laughed.
“Ya Nannav… its better than black, brown or maroon!”
“No… I’m painting it white…” Arnav refused.
“No no Arnav bitwa… how borings!” Maami made a disgusting face.
“I know what I’m doing… after all it is my child too!” he gritted his teeth.
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Khushi looked at Arnav as he brought in loads and loads of teddy bears, he bought a crib, some wall stickers as well. He had bought something else as well, but she couldn’t see it, as it was in a bag.
Arnav walked in their room and placed everything, and he kept the bag with him. He left their room heading towards their baby’s room.
Khushi stood behind the door, watching him paint the room plain white.
“Laad Governor! He lives in his own black and white world and now he wants our baby to have the same choice as him!” she muttered.
By the time she looked up, Arnav stood in front of her, holding balloons. They seemed more of water balloons.
“I did my part… now it’s your turn to make this white room, filled with colours just like you filled my black and white world with colour…” he handed her a balloon.
She had a wide smile playing at her lips as she took hold of a balloon. Her excitement level had reached its heights as she threw the balloon on the wall.
The yellow paint splattered across the wall, and Arnav handed another one. This time it was red. Green, purple, orange, blue, pink and many various colours were splattered across the room.
The room was now filled with numerous colours. Arnav watched her throwing balloon after balloon on the wall.
‘How is she going to handle our baby when she herself is a baby?’ he asked himself.
“Last one…” he said.
“Your turn…” she handed him the balloon.
He took it from her hand and threw it on the wall. The silver paint spread across the wall, as it changed the effect of the room.
“Perfect…” she smiled.
Arnav looked at her delighted face. She was satisfied with their baby’s room. “It’s beautiful…” she hugged him tight.
“It is…” he smiled.
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“Arnavji… how long will it take!” she pouted.
Khushi was standing outside the room, waiting for him to come out so that she could see the final look of their baby’s room.
“2 minutes Khushi…” he said from inside.
“It’s been half an hour that you’ve been saying 2 minutes! When will your 2 minutes finish!” she kicked the door.
Finally he opened it, and quickly covered her eyes with a black cloth.
“Seriously Arnavji! I want to see the room!” she whined.
“You will… patience…”
Arnav guided her in the room and counted, “One. Two. Three…” he untied the cloth from her eyes.
Khushi opened her eyes, and the image of their baby’s room brought tears in her eyes.
“Don’t you like it?” he asked her… afraid of her response.
“It’s so cute…” and by now tears had started rolling down her eyes.
“Then why are you crying?” he turned her around to face him.
“Because… you won’t understand! Khushi ke aasoo hai…” she sniffed.
“I know they’re your tears but at least tell me why are you crying? Is there something missing?” he asked.
“They’re tears of happiness you duffer!” she hugged him tight.
“Mood swings…” he muttered.
Arnav earned a punch at his chest, his wife was no less than a tigress. “I heard that!”
Arnav laughed and placed a soft kiss at her forehead. Oh how he wished that everything would remain as it is. And how the happiness would float around… but was it possible if he had a devil in the house?


Chances = Impossible.

67 comments:

  1. so pretty update.........
    finally everything gonna fine.....
    i like the nani,mami n nk helped arnav.....
    arnav nw trying his best to back khushi......
    khushi is so pleased to see her baby's room....
    it was so touchy part........
    tht creepwaa shyam n anjali rot in hell....
    waiting fr next part.........
    - Akorshi -

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    1. m the first one to comment yay!!!!!!!!
      before u pm........

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    2. LOL
      Hahaha... ur funny :P
      well you are first :P
      And second LOL

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    3. Enjoyed reading this and thx for the PM

      Bhadraprasad(IF)

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  2. awww..that was cuteness personified..
    loved it..

    arniepervaiz

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  3. Awesome update man ! Hopefullly Khushi will forgive Arnav soon man

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  4. amazing update
    loved it
    loved how everyone planning pain a room for ArShi's baby and aww Arnav got to paint it
    Anjali is grr same dumbo
    liked how nani and others replied to her telling her that her husband will paint her baby's room
    awwee loved last part of ArShi and they way they painted the room
    thanks for pm
    looking forward to read next
    continue soon

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    1. I thought of adding something cute...
      and hence I did :P

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  5. that was so cute...loved it!!
    Yesterday he became a gol gappa wala and today he became a painter..lol
    I am in love with this Arnav..
    I loved the balloon part...Khushi filled colors in the room..
    very nicely written..
    do update soon..
    thanks for the pm..

    --Amy--

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  6. man anji your husband should be doing things for your baby which isnt yours not your chotte
    arrey kam tak arnav ko apne pallu mein bandhein rahengi aap
    adn that devil needs to be rid of pronto man
    and thank god they are making arnie do some decorating for the baby room
    even if the baby wont be here for a while still no harm in starting early
    hope this baby will come in the world please font kill them this time
    cheers for pm
    bet that git also slimy creature will do something for sure

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    1. I won't kill this baby...
      don't worry... I'm not so evil LOL

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  7. hope khushi will forgive arnav

    it was a nice updt


    summaiyasayed

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  8. awesome updatee...
    loved the the last part of book 1...
    arhii cute fighting again :D
    anjii u are feeling bad or ur brother child only so bad :O
    thnx 4 pm :)
    (if)-kvarsha













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  9. awesome update!
    loved the balloons part ;)
    thanks to pm me
    farista12

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  10. everything seems fine, but the snake is still in the house

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  11. awesome update
    loved it
    thanks for the pm
    drunkiiebabe

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  12. Awesome! Wat he did was so cute! He filled water balloons with paint and let her throw the balloons to paint the room!How sweet! I want a hubby like Arnav!
    ~Mahi1219

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  13. awesome update
    loved it a lot so cute

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  14. wow, it is so cute, loved it really to much.
    Anjali is on my nerves now, how can she be
    jealous about the baby's room, dammit Arnav
    is the father of the baby he have to make
    his baby's room speciale, why she doesn't
    ask to her lovely husband to make spacial
    her douther's room, insted of asking it
    to her mama. But thank god that nani did it
    for me.
    Nk is superb, loved him.
    I really really hope that their baby come
    to this word safe and fine,
    with the devil (Shyam) you can't be sure.
    continue soon.

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  15. Hy love the update love arnav sooo cute love hw he didnt want to do it at first then he did everything hope she forgives him soon
    Update soon
    Thanks for the pm

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  16. awesome update...
    loved it.......
    hope anjali doesn't interrupt in arnav and khushi life.........

    thanks for the pm in IF....... pavi1

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  17. Awwww so cute continue soon and thank u for pm me
    [ASR6262]

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  18. awww that an awesome update gosh it was so cute loved how they decorated the room

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  19. Wow i love d update. Specially Balloon part so cute.

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  20. awww such a cute update :)

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  21. loved how they decorated the baby's room together
    this was sooooooooooooo cute
    loved it
    arnav and khushi r going to be wonderful parents
    continue soon
    thanx for the pm

    arhi101

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  22. Awesome update !!! Loved it
    pinky89

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  23. omg its so cute , romantic , nice ,lovely etc.,
    painting room for their child
    so lovely i feel delighted
    thanks for the wonderful update

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  24. Awesome part..
    Loved to see Arnav doing these stuffs for his baby..
    Thanks for the PM.. XD

    Amanda.Lim

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  25. Awsome n cuteeee update!!!!!!! bt precap was breakin ma heart!!! (Dazz)

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  26. Awesome update..
    Awww... Arnav and Khushi painted their unborn child's room of their own... That was very sweet..
    Uffu!! Anjali! What the hell is her problem..
    Like nani's answer of painting Anjali's baby's room by shayam...
    Waiting for the final part..
    Thanks for the pm..

    Humayra(IF)

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  27. aww this part was damn cute....
    anjali should be asking her husband to do all these things which apparently he is not doing.....
    btw now that anjali has a child then why isnt arnav throwing that snake out?? now anjali is not pregnant right??
    i hope kushi forgives him.....
    anjali u better dont come in between arshi...
    awsum update
    kamalapushpa

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  28. cute update!loved the 'painting with balloons' idea...

    damonzlady

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  29. awwwwwww i loved this part

    watx wrong with Anjali..god! she getting on my nerves now :/

    thnnks 4 the PM

    ~ Dhishtee08Arshi ~ IF ~

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  30. wow awesome loved it,i can imagine how would be that room is.it will be sooo beautiful.continue soon.

    by farha5556
    IF

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  31. aww this update is soooo cute..:@

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  32. chalo..!!!

    Anjali se dimaag hata Arnav ka..:)

    Khushi's happy..:) n so's Arnav..
    i wish he dsnt get angry on her 4 ne reason..
    Anjaliji k liye Shyam ji haina..:/

    huh let dem paint der room..

    loved it..:)

    *reallyhappy*

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  33. Hmph... possessive Anjali. But she got what she deserved, Shyamji hai naa, to paint her baby's room...boo.
    I really loved the idea of the colour balloons.
    Now i'll just have to bug my father for one.(Argh, Kavya grow up)
    Overall a cute update.
    So the book 1's gonna end with another chapter.
    Ok lets see where this'll end:)
    IF name:kiddy-kavya

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  34. kritaSH HERE.
    LOVED IT,
    loved the way arnav painted whole room in white and the gave water balloons to kushi to fill the colors as she did for arnav.
    awesome.

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  35. hmm.... this was so cute!!!
    he painted the room and in hatke style!!!
    loved it!

    shagun (IF-shagun05)

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  36. awsume update..


    nd khushi k aasu...hhaha...seriously arnav u r duffer!!!lolzz

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  37. This update was too cute..
    And i just hated the jealous Anji!!
    I hope everything will be fine soon :)
    Thanks for pm

    sanchi333

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  38. Khushi and her mood swings.. ;)
    Loved Arshi (as always)... :)

    IF
    AJlovesArshi

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  39. Awww. . Arnav painted the room for their baby.. Thats so sweet.. <3

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  40. Loved it......that was so romantic !
    Vandana sagat

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  41. super cute update!!!

    loved the way he decorated the room so creatively...

    and "khushi ke aansu " was just too good :-) I always wanted this dialogue to be there in the show!!!

    devil or not...i just wish they are always together!!!

    arnavbarun

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  42. Thanks for the PM. Loved the idea of Khushi throwing the balloons to fill the room with color. Awesome.

    -desisweetheart9 from IF.

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  43. I am so sorry I can't reply back for everyone...
    I read everyone's comments and I am touched.
    I will for sure misss writing this one...
    but Book 2 will come and I hope you guys like it as it will be like a new start :-p

    Thank You all for showing me love and supporting me all this way :D
    Love you guys sooooo much!!!!

    Even the silent ones ;)

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  44. Fab ravneet
    such a cute ch
    thankz for the pm

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  45. nice update ,
    NK ,Mami ,and asr seen was nice .............

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  46. What devil in the house? Oh god here comes a.twist!
    I just hope that it wont affect khushis pregancy!
    Loved the update
    Arnav black and white world! LOL!
    Loved the update!

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  47. Aww Arnav painted d baby room shoooo sweet of him!!:):)

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  48. So cute.... Finally they are getting better.... Nice update...

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